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So Long
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Until we meet again my friends in a weaker state of mind!

My sensitivity,
along with my negativity,
which are fractions of my true soul,
decided to fold.


They packed their bags,
and took their rags,
then got the hell out of here,
because they were in fear,
of loosing equality,
in their formality.


I hated to see the little peewee suckers depart,
it almost broke my heart.
I love all my qualities,
because they are apart of my totalities.
Even though I no longer needed there input,
I understood their output.


They use to play such a big role,
they just hated to fold.


I gave them a going away party,
and during the celebration,
they kept complaining about elimination.


So I gave them this summation,
"if you're a fraction of holding me down,
you've got to get the hell out of town."


So I blinked,
and they were gone. 


G 


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 Reviews of "So Long"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Very well written.
Like this one.
Nico

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
excellent Grady!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
They come and go!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Excellent thought processes, well described poem!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
A great Gradyism! I'll save this one.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
<Smiling> This is excellant Grady from the first all the way to the last line!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Hahaha! Good for you. Nice poem.

Reviewed on July 23, 2003
i like, grady, i like! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend down texas way, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
Takes a true man to show weakness/vunerable.

cool write


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