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Roots of a Love Tree
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Love needs protection

I was 18. I was a schoolboy
I stood between the two extremes
of conflicting personality balance

At school I was as slow as a tortoise
At play I was as energetic as a horse
At social life I was baffled by the
harsh storms of teenage
I needed a love patner
but never knew how to approach

A flash from an ebony face
relieved me from the pain of
loneliness. Jane stepped in my life
In a magic smile of few seconds
I completely became a new man
strange winds blew across my chest

The sky picked clouds of romance
Torrential love-rains poured on me
I swam in an oasis of infatuation
A flame of love flickered in all directions as my lungs sucked blood

My ears touched the sound
of a weeping soul
My tongue felt the taste
of a pure romantic joy

Ou feelings reached unimaginable
hieghts of passion
We mixed bloods and sketched
tattoos on the skins of our
loving hearts as we set off
for a romantic venture
Committed we were to protect
our love with thje power of love

But the journey has not been
as comfortable as I thought
We found the road a bit rough
But we put up with the challenge
Like a flower garden, love needs
constant weeding and spraying
Mutual understanding patched up
our differnces early enough

What looked to be a small boat
has now grown to the size of a ship
We synchronized our vision
we speak the same love language
The roots of our love tree
has penetrated deep into the soil
of trust and confidence.

Jane saved my life.








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 Reviews of "Roots of a Love Tree"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
What a wonderful love story!

Reviewed on June 15, 2004
This is very beautiful... a love to be treasured.

Reviewed on June 15, 2004
Wonderful stuff from you, Abdi-Noor! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
It is the ability to take on the challenges that deepens the love between two people and you two are very successful! Thank you for the sharing.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2004
Abdi this is wonderful...I found that when two people who
love each other go through the fire of trials...they come
out stronger than ever....it is Gods way of purification..
I wish you a good long strong union with your beloved.
this was a very touching poem...floria

Reviewed on June 13, 2004
A beautiful write with much love expressed from your soul...Hope expressed for all who have a first love..Great write!
Antoinette

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2004
This is so beautiful poet. When a relationship is right it does change us... You capture this change so beautifuly in this tribute to Jane...
"What looked to be a small boat
has now grown to the size of a ship
We synchronized our vision
we speak the same love language
The roots of our love tree
has penetrated deep into the soil
of trust and confidence.

Jane saved my life. "

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 13, 2004
Abdi-noor, this is a masterpice! I felt such a strong burst of
life flood through me as I read this most beautiful poem of your love.You speak with wisdom that so many young people lack. This should be shared with them, and the adults too. Thanks for sharing with us!Kudo's!;-)
Thanks for your friendship, you encourage me!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 13, 2004
Like a flower garden, love needs
constant weeding and spraying

How true, Abdi-Noor; and what a magnificent love poem. My soulmate saved my life, too. Well Done!


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