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Next time I should be careful
Today it is my second day in Mars It is a marvelous place to come I paid a visit to many sites I toured Insects' General Hospital Doctor Termite was the manager In the emergency ward, I met a nurse Thirty mosquitoes were being treated Cause of their accident was strange They at once landed on a tree branch causing the branch to fall Some of them died Others were wounded In the middle of my visit My eyes caught a familiar face She was Miss Butterfly She was my girlfriend I rushed to greet her with hugs But I was soon hospitalized my lower lip got swollen She stung me so bitterly Have I made a mistake? Have I kissed the wrong friend? No. I didn't She was butterfly herself But in Mars the story is different Things work in a more unusual way Buterflies do give honey and sting Bees don't.

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Outstanding write.
Enjoyed this one.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Interesting trp. The bugs are everywhere these days.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Quite fascinating, Abdi-noor; thanks for the journey! Glad I could come along! LOL

(((HUGS))), love, and continued prayers~ As always, your friend and sister in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

(((abdi-noor)))

a uniquely penned vacation into realms unknown...thanks for taking me with you--well done! thought provoking piece

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

A fascinating trip, Abdi-Noor. After you recover from your butterfly sting, would you care to join BUG?!

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Love the line ,"butterflies do give honey and sting bees don't." Mars is indeed whimsical and different. Peace and blessiiings my friend.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Mars seems like a very tiny place:)
Safi

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

well done ... sounds familiar ...

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