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Shuttling Between Venus and Mars
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In a talk I had with a teenage girl
I was amazed by her deep asirations
She was thinking of becoming a doctor
She wanted to be a graduate with honors
She wanted to build life with love
She wanted to raise a family
She impressed me with her deep insight
Then I met with a boy of her age
I asked what he intended to do in life
He mentioned nothing more than football
He still hanged on his mother's apron
He had no vision beyond childish desires
He fell short of my expectations
Then I expnaded my exercise to another group
I explored the minds of old people
An eighy year-old man became my subject
I asked what hopes did he have in life
He instead spoke of his accomplishments
He was more than happy to talk to me
He told stories with fine articulation
Then I went to his age-mate, a woman
I put her same question as I did to him
She found it hard to explain everything
Looking back was no easy job for her
She aimed high but achieved little
The forces of culture pulled her down
My final conclusion shows grim results
Women have more dreams than opportunities
Men have more opportunities than dreams
I shuttled between Mars and Venus
I reached heights of gender injustice




 

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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on January 25, 2005
this is the world we live in, i wonder sometimes, is it changing? can it change? are the things we find important indicative of deeper differences between us, or just a result of the cultures we find ourselves in. interesting scientific experiment, with even more interesting results.

Reviewed on November 13, 2004
(((abdi-noor)))

thank you, sir, for speaking out for all women, many of which are not at liberty to raise their own voice. perhaps this will change--i pray so

wise words, thank you for being my brother and friend--you are always in my prayer, as is your family and nation

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Wise insights, Abd-Noor. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
Excellent conclusions Abdi Noor!;-) You have much wisdom!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
much insight here

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
Notice most rulers are male? and we wonder why the world is in trouble? It is the woman that holds the vision :-) Great write.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
Ah, may dreams and opportunities be equally embraced by all one day,
Abdi-Noor. An engaging write, much enjoyed.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
As a whole I think you may be right, this is very thought provoking.

Reviewed on November 12, 2004
Wonderful write. Yes, I think most of what you say is true. Wonderful insight.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
Nice write. I glad I have both...


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