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1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7...breath
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Listening to digital imports again, www.di.fm
reminiscing to a time when…

18 years ago, or so,
I was at a street concert in Jamaica
.
There were hundreds of people there.
They were all burning one from
...ganja heaven.

Summer in the Caribbean
,
where the night air rests.
As if all of the atoms get doped up…
stoned out, and still.

Anyway the air was full of smoke,
all I needed to do was breath.

Years later,
spinning to trance, mixed with vodka.
Wondering if maybe tomorrow
I'll go stare at a tree....
maybe it will set me free...
maybe I'll need to count to 10 instead of 7.

Only problem is...
I can never escape myself.
No matter how hard I try.
And yet...
I just can't give up
...always hoping for another tomorrow.

I could stare into a million spots and count to seven
a thousand times,
I could fly through the universe,
but ultimately I would still be me.
Ultimately, I would still be my choices.
There just isn't any escape from the past...you know?
So no point in reminiscing.
Best leave tomorrow alone.


 


 

copyright © 2004 sara coslett


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 Reviews of "1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7...breath"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
Yup-- you can't step into tomorrow like any particular Alice through a glass... but tomorrow comes to us inevitably-- sure as rain... --Charlie

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2007
perfection, sara I have to say it carried a bluesy feel,
flowing thoughts like rising smoke, loved this piece, your vision is exquisite, mike

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
Wow. I keep trying to lose myself, but I just keep showing up. You spin a story in your poetry on several levels. I love it. Liz

Reviewed on September 19, 2004
(((sara)))

a pleasure to read your words...one experiences brave new worlds :)

BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2004
This is the freshest thing I have read on here in months, a raw, edgy write, AD needs more of this kind because you really show a distinct voice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 6, 2004
Well written Sara!!
Love from a warm Bristol

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2004
LOL Ted..now i'm going to stop, yup learn from past, live life in full, for present...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2004
Did you know that looking into the sky and counting to seven or ten or twenty or even a hundred is a sign of mental illness? Neither did I, that's probably why I stopped doing it when someone told me that it was.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 4, 2004
from the past we learn to further our tomorrows ...


awesome poem revealing an episode that still lives on today ...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on June 4, 2004
I know about not being able to escape myself. So irritating at times, lol. This also reminded me of a time when I saw a band called 3rd World and I also saw Bob Marley. That was in 1979 (I believe) wow, I am showing my age and I can still smell the smoke or should I say taste it??? Hee hee. Thanks for the memories.

Janet xoxoxo


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