Sorry to offend my
Selfish senseless sensibilities
Again
But I will not give in to my
Belligerent beguiling behavior
Of yesterday, or was it the
Day before when I
Deliriously detoured domesticity
Only to wake up hung over and not
Relishing the task of
Relentlessly replacing realities
Of my nether
Mind with
Mental masturbatory manipulations
Of the men I love
Who love me not.
Sorry folks I was in an alliterative state of mind tonight.
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Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
This is an example of what I like to call stunt poetry. fantastic!
There is nothing to apologize about...
If you blue you blue....and there are no rules to that.....we did get the okay on that did'nt we....spit it ou scream and shout and I Tinka will do it with you...
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2003
The only time I ever achieved the skill of alliterative speech was when I talked with a lisp when drunk. Of course that wasn't a brilliant method like this one Sara. Super Poet and Super Woman! But I don't know if my manipulations came from my nether mind or elsewhere? Bill
I agree with James, this is awesome!
Love this part...
"Deliriously detoured domesticity
Only to wake up hung over and not
Relishing the task of
Relentlessly replacing realities"
I love this!
For some reason, I wanted to read it fast, all in one breath.
Kind of reminds me of a Dennis Miller rant.
And don't apologize....I like this state of mind.
-James
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Adam
Wonderfully written!
~ Dee
If you blue you blue....and there are no rules to that.....we did get the okay on that did'nt we....spit it ou scream and shout and I Tinka will do it with you...
Love
Tinka
Love this part...
"Deliriously detoured domesticity
Only to wake up hung over and not
Relishing the task of
Relentlessly replacing realities"
Excellent write!
Hugs,
Maria
For some reason, I wanted to read it fast, all in one breath.
Kind of reminds me of a Dennis Miller rant.
And don't apologize....I like this state of mind.
-James