I have watched you from afar
I have studied you
I know your moves
I know how you seduce
I know how you hide the truth
I have seen you lie
To me
To your family
To your friends
To your women
It breaks my heart
It makes me sad
It makes me cry throughout the day
It makes me almost pray
It makes me despair
Why, why is life so unfair
Why can’t you do what you say
Why can’t you answer me when I ask you to
Why can’t you stop playing mind games
Why can’t you love me like I love you
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Reviews of "I Am Clever Too"
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
One always loves more than the other, the ol' when two forces of equal mass meet trick.
Oh!! Hey !!on which side of that boat ae you sitting??
Seems to me we are sailing the same sinking damn boat here....ggggrrr ...this is soooo sad Super Girl....I know this feeling all tooooo well.... I will do the praying part Okay!!!
God Bless all those thats sailing the same old love boat....Take care
Much,Much Warm Love
Tinka
I have seen you lie
To me
To your family
To your friends
Time to cut and run, Super Girl! He even lies to himself, don't you. Excellent write, you nailed it, a liar is a liar is a liar.
We Live In a World Of People who Lie About Anything Esp.To Those Who Love Them Most__It's Time To Look to Higher Realms,Go, Walk Away, And, Never, Do Not Look Back...
I'd Rather Be Alone Than With Anywhere Near a Liar,i.e. even My Own Son Who Has Lied Since Day He Was Born...
TRASK
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Well expressed, SuperGirl.
And the answer is...it was never meant to be.
On the other hand... maybe the character in your poem is clever enough *not* to love a liar?
Sally O.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Why indeed! Love can truly be pleasure or pain...A fine line is right! Excellent, moving write...Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Supergirl,
Excellent "Why can’t you stop playing mind games
Why can’t you love me like I love you "
Always the mind games I love this one.
And the repetition at the start of verses.
peg
Reviewed by Kelie Urbanec (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
I have had the same experience too. I wrote a poem about it too. It is really hard to deal with someone who lies all the time. I wish I meet a guy that I can trust and I hope that you do too. You deserve it. Great poem. It is the only way to let true feelings out in the open.
With Love
~Kelie~
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Seems to me we are sailing the same sinking damn boat here....ggggrrr ...this is soooo sad Super Girl....I know this feeling all tooooo well.... I will do the praying part Okay!!!
God Bless all those thats sailing the same old love boat....Take care
Much,Much Warm Love
Tinka
To me
To your family
To your friends
Time to cut and run, Super Girl! He even lies to himself, don't you. Excellent write, you nailed it, a liar is a liar is a liar.
We Live In a World Of People who Lie About Anything Esp.To Those Who Love Them Most__It's Time To Look to Higher Realms,Go, Walk Away, And, Never, Do Not Look Back...
I'd Rather Be Alone Than With Anywhere Near a Liar,i.e. even My Own Son Who Has Lied Since Day He Was Born...
TRASK
And the answer is...it was never meant to be.
~E
Sally O.
Excellent "Why can’t you stop playing mind games
Why can’t you love me like I love you "
Always the mind games I love this one.
And the repetition at the start of verses.
peg
With Love
~Kelie~