Your eyes pool green
When seen
In the sun of the moment
Until I start to lick your
Throat
And kiss you
On the mouth
Slowly moving onto other parts
Yes, then
The green
That I am seeing
Is a green
I can’t describe
A lustfulness
That grabs me
Like a chameleon
In disguise
A power
That I fell in love with
Your eyes
My lovely husband
Who loves me unconditionally
Who I occasionally forget about
When he gets lost in the shuffle
Of the games that get played
With the bad boys of the internet
When he looks at me
And says, "Okay,
The world is your Oyster.
Go meet it head on."
Who knew that in the end
I would come home to him
My husband
The man who really loves me
In all of loves true colors
And not in its fantasy illusions
Of false loves
Imposing their contusions.
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Reviews of "Green Light Means Go"
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
I have nothing to compare with this experience but time may change that.
Oh dear...you got me right in the heart with this one,
Excellent and powerfully written,
Reindeer
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2003
This was chilling for me. Yes, I agree, we really do not see though we know it is right in front of our eyes. Very deeply written and I could totally see where this came from... what a wonderful heart you have. Teresa
Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
beautifully written reality...a reminder we all need
Super Girl, expertly done. Love the profound love of this.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
No words could I justifiabley type to describe my impression of WOW WOW WOW...awesome supergirl!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
There are so many people who reach out for something tangible in the least tangible of all places the internet. You have found your connection, keep hooking up with it.
Yikes! This started out so beautifully, the images sublimed, then the twist, the loving letting go, and the recognized truth...all combine in a startling and touching read... Wonderful work, Sara! What a man!! :)
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Excellent and powerfully written,
Reindeer
~Nikki~
Sometimes we long for something that was there all along.
-James