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And then it was over
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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He said, "Follow me
I know the way.
You are the only one I trust."

And then I broke us
That trust
I had for him
And he had for me

Such a foolish woman
How could I think I was invincible?
I’m not a kid
I’m an adult
I know that there is no eternity in life
Only in death

How could I not see?
No matter where he went
He always came back to me
Until he didn’t
Any
More

And then it was over
I cried for him
I hated me
I begged him to take me back
I love him now
And always
I love him

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 Reviews of "And then it was over"
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
I've been there

still there in my mind and even my heart sometimes... though I know it's truly wrong

I can't help myself

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Always in childhood each moment is an eternity, for we have no sense of death. Then through adolescence we learn of mortality. Our twenties are spent conceiving distractions from our newfound knowledge. The next step I see, as I'm turning 29 this very day is a turning away from distraction and owning up to mortality. But I think love is the binding principle. It just gets more complex with age. For example a baby at first recognition of its mother feels love. Then the hardships begin: I'm wet , I'm cold, I'm soiled. It's the same for adults as I see it. It's just the impetuses that get more complex. What does this person provide that I hadn't realized I needed before I met this person. What would I do if this person were out of my life? Babies and children never face this conundrum for an eternity of care is at their disposal. I guess what I'm trying to say is that I understand. But I thought I'd make it clear just how I understand.

Adam

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
ohhhhh the endless loops we put ourselves thru!
chin up!
think boomerang!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Eyes front and keep moving forward

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
5-31-03

Sometimes You Just Don't Know How Lucky You Really Are,i.e. Don't Look Back...

TRASK

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Fully agree with Andy, though I know how hard this is. But I really guess he's not worth it. Keep on moving forward without looking back....Love. S

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Such a poignant piece, Sara.very well written.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
nEVER TAKE AN EX BACK THINK MORE OF YOURSELF, NOT MANY TO BE HONOURED BY THE LIKES OF ONE LIKE YOU...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Work on your tan and move on.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Oh! Sara what can I say...I think nothing...no words... will do the thing here!!
I know better than you realize!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
ditto on Liz's comment...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Sounds like an abusive relationship vacillating back and forth, back and forth, back and forth, back and forth....


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