set me free (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Less of the "lowly woman" sweetie, the female always comes before the man, that's how we know the chicken came before the egg.

But I suppose I owe you another chat on the "meaning of life"

Ian

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

I keep telling you that you are one of the best writers I know. Can you hear me now?

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

He should get the point. The own happiness comes first - then there is time enough left to take care of the rest of the world.
Don't even ask - just get started!
Nico

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

Certainly not lowly, though there is beauty in being humble.
I liked this one a lot Sara.
Watch out for that kiss it might enslave you instead.

best wishes

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

mon ami.. I trust your tongue was in your cheek when writing 'lowly woman'.. for you are not lowly, but a beam of light fit for your own star.. I shall name you POET DELUXE! and gaze again at this most fabulous piece..It is in my library now. what a WRITE! (smile) love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

A moving, questioning (not questionable, don't misinterpret) piece of poetry which stands alone. Good.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

your wisdo really shows off in this one...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

"Mon amour, oui." C'est tr�s bien exprim� ce po�me. Much wisdom is expressed here. Thank you for this.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Your mind was in high gear when you thought of this one, Sara...splendid deductions in a wonderful poem

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

Beautiful heartfelt piece Sara!!

Hey light Up girl..its weekend....and time to go for a very long walk like I did...it clears your head a "Tiny " little bit...and see live with a new smile on your face...!!

Hey did you forget about the fact that we are "one" in this!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

You have showered much wisdom here in the wonderful write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

From hydrogen to Einstein! The universe is just so " amazingly amazing" I think the key to saving the world is to see the simplicity of the complexity, the infinite in the finite, the one in the many.
I like how you have moments opposed to time there at the beginning. And I dig the french at the end... french turns me on.

Adam

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on October 31, 2003

this piece is full of wisdom
only those who are real are free to love

good write!