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Deconstructing Love
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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I thought I knew you
And you knew me
I thought you loved me
As much as I loved you
But in the end
All you loved
Was the thrill
Of attraction
Like a chemical reaction
Ammonia mixed with chlorine
Kaboom
Explosions
Kisses
Thrusts
In me
Out of me
One inch
All the way
Lick me
Blow you
All hell
In the end
Just two egos
On overload
So kiss my ass
Yes, kiss it 
As I'm loving you


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 Reviews of "Deconstructing Love"
Reviewed by Gary Gebert
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
So true.

Gary

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
That one is phantastic.
Will keep it in my library - just in case I'll ever again have to tell a man what I think of him, before I kick him out of my life..
Excellent piece.
Nico

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
this is great! just luved it...

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Aren't men rascals at time.
What a kaboom of a write.
Interesting last line, it speaks the loudest

peace

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Did you drink gasoline instead of coffee??

Explosive write Sara...hope you okay...and hey pull up those pants....lol!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Make it bare!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
good write.....

some guys suck, huh?

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
wow explosive and very direct, excellent movement from and thru the relationship

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Uh, is it okay now to say that this was a HELL OF A PIECE OF WRITING!

Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Hahaha!!!!! This was great, Sara!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Well Sara, that's one way to get his attention! *grin* I'm sure your message will be recieved with an echo! Well done! Lisa


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