A last lline,'shocker,' indeed. As you tell me, let's be positive here. I would change tat last line word to "deserve me." This is a love poem, is it not? - Bill
Your last question in so personal! It hurts! Many of us may not like to answer that one truthfully. If you were in my dreams I'm sure I would enjoy your company as much as I enjoy reading your work.
Happy Holiday
William
Merry Christmas soul sis!!
Love Tinka
Hmmmm...this is a real poem to ponder.. very well done.
Merry Christmas to you and yours...Have a great day Sara......best wishes, Dani
Gary