I had posted this a couple of nights ago on another page before the new rules went into effect. As such I will only be using this page for my poetry and my Global Nation Organization page for articles on topics GNO is targeting for future development.
I am including the reviews from the first posting so that those authors do not feel obligated to posting another review. Thank you.
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It takes a lot of courage to be honest.
So ask yourself, which are you? Courageous or honest?
I thought I would write about love, but I found myself lost in pain. So I wondered is love the same as pain?
I keep thinking…NO! Love…oh my love, Love is good. It is a good feeling, that feels good. It is love.
So then if love is good what is this pain?
It isn’t the anti-thesis of love. For that would be hate.
Oh, I see. Pain is love, minus love.
YES, that is it! Pain is love, minus love. Mathematically speaking of course.
Love, minus love, equals... Pain.
Now if he could only find the courage to be honest. For love minus love, plus honesty equals FREEDOM! -------------------------------------------------
Reviewed by Jay Chattin
2/13/2004
Courageous and honest are the rules, but like all rules there are exceptions to the rules. Well written honest and courageous piece.
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Reviewed by Ted Sheridan
2/13/2004
Two plus two it's not an I owe you, but a love ya too.
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Reviewed by Jeff Mason
2/13/2004
I love math! Sara, this is [wonderfully] done! -- Jeff
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Reviewed by May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel
2/13/2004
You have an interesting definition for love. Well-done!
~ May / Sandie ~
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Reviewed by Southern Horizons
2/13/2004
Good write Sara..interesting equation you came up with though. But then...you seemed to make it work! Lisa
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Reviewed by Ch'erie Perrette
2/13/2004
You got it Sara, now how does one get freedom from pain :)
My god, Sara.. this is bloody amazing! Would you mind if I park myself up there in your head for an afternoon.. it has got to be simply fascinating to watch your wheels turn... you and this piece are the very essence of unique! Don't doubt it for a second. katy xox.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
I should say then, I'm in pain instead of, I'm in love..
Happy V Day! Painful, 0oops, lovely write.......
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Happy V Day! Painful, 0oops, lovely write.......
Ah sweet pain thy misery
What pleasures form thy give to me
Whereof the thoughts my soul embrace
For love should show such sonsie face.
Hesione Rhadamanthus
Love Tinka