Spinning round on a wheel became a puzzling time.
Spinning like a spider falling
to the ground.
My mind often spins as life deals too many cards.
I want to be the joker so life
won't be so hard.
I was happy when God helped me truly find my way.
Then it did a 180 directing me the
opposite way.
My life seemed all cooshie for a little while.
My weekends were all free. So I'd run the extra mile.
Now too busy to take a breath, or hardly time to pray.
Is this how life's supposed to be? Am I going the wrong way?
When will my life turn back a little giving me what I need.
I'll take the time to say more prayer hopefully finding my way.
A great reminder. We as a society need to slow down. Difficult to do with all the emphasis on money.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
You know what gets me back on my feet?-I just think about all of the pretty things out there in life that we have not seen....then you realize life is too important to sit around and cry--- THIS was GREAT!!!!! Teresa
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
This sounds so much like my life at times this 2was so cool and awesome very great poem here nice job on it
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Enjoyed your poem, great slice of real life.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Hi Marlene, Thank You for the excellent write.
namaste
tony
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Life is like this Marlene,
it really ios so well done.
peggy
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tony
it really ios so well done.
peggy