My Sins (poem) by Dayvid Graybill on AuthorsDen

My Sins
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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I wanna tell you my sins But I feel like plastic bending to nothing except the world without its bleeding heart. I wanna tell you my sins But my fear of dying keeps me buying Band-Aids to stop the blood flow out of the hole in my heart. I wanna tell you my sins But I want to tell you as I run. Harder faster harder faster than you and everyone else. As you push back I wanna tell you my sins. I kill I look I swallow I speed I waste I want I hate I want I sneer I lie I cheat I want I steal I Kill I hate I want I FUCKED UP! I wanna tell you my sins. It will make me famous and still nobody cares about this hole I hide in my heart. I wanna tell you my sins standing naked before you. feeling the softness of your eyes scanning down across my being. I melt into your love. I wanna tell you my sins. I wanna tell you my sins. I wanna tell you I wanna tell you I wanna tell you I wanna tell you I love you. By Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 24, 2010

this is such an honest, cleansing and love filled write-i love it!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 21, 2010

Simple, honest words that contain a powerful profession.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 20, 2010

it is such a beautiful thing to free the heart's soul
of weighted burdens...those sins that need to be set free
Blessings Vickie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 18, 2010

I know these feeling and I know that love "gone astray" can leave a hole in the soul. Powerfully expressed, Dayvid. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

I am suddenly touched by the anguish I feel in your words. I have been there and came out just as your words portray!
Blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Excellent work! Disclosure has its peace. This does have a Cohen beat to it, some Dylan too. Keep up work like My Sins and your followers will be many, Dayvid...Blessed Be.

Warmly,
Sage

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Willing to share pure honesty, not one of us are innocent, it's good for us to admit that we are not perfect but we are capable of love. Great write dayvid.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

This is quite a love profession!!!! Deeply moving Dayvid, nicely written. Thank you for sharing.

<Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by George Carroll

Powerful emotions expressed, from a heart willing to give all for his love.