My Dimmed Soul (poem) by Dayvid Graybill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on February 1, 2011

Schizophrenia is like poetry. Patrick

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2011

Truly a soul-opener..

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on January 24, 2011

Dayvid, your silence is loud and clear. -gene.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2011

Wowwwww .. this is wonderful writing sweet man...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by The Poetess

Reviewed on January 10, 2011

Wow! A haunting piece that is full of life. . .the way it really is.
I can feel that Light still exists within the depths of this colorlessness. Shine on. . .

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 9, 2011

the artistry of this emotional
piece needs a beautiful frame
and precisely hung

Charcoal Drawing Pencils
Vickie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

Pure gold artistry, Dayvid.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

Dayvid, "Listening for a miracle of colors
Seeing only swirling desperate silence"---
A powerful and personal write!
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

you can definately see and feel silence. Morgan

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

Honest, from the soul and indicative of what most of us have felt or feel.

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

Sounds like someone in deep depression.
God be with you.
Lew

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

nicely expressed, sad

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

Lovely piece of writing.

Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

I hope the miracle of color arrives soon.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

I feel dimmness within your words Dayvid. I believe in a small opening you'll see a little light, let it in Dayvid.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

Interesting write, Dayvid.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 8, 2011

This one makes me think...think of what I am not sure, but it does...e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2011

Perhaps within that silence is that "still, small, voice... I think many of us can relate to what you have shared within your verses here, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2011

journey of proportion, colors, shades, thoughts running deep, reflective, questioning the inner, the outer circumstance. true poetry at its core.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 7, 2011

Silence may be intimidating to some, but it is also an opportunity for one to reflect upon to improve,interesting perspective...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 7, 2011

Dayvid,
this vividly written poem touches me. Silence can be such torture. But among that silence so much can always be heard.

Welcome back, my friend,
Amber