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moment of silence
by evan m horetsky → (All Poetry by evan m horetsky)
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I wrote this one while in church....i don't know I feel something off with this one....but I'll post it anyways...

Criticism, good or bad, is greatly appreciated

In a moment of silence,
So much is heard.
All this feeling and emotion,
Not intended for words.


This glance, this smile,
Already I get answers.
This comfortable feeling,
As I start to romance her.


Her lips are silent,
For I hold the key.
Already she has abandoned,
All these thoughts to me.


Yet so complex are these minds,
Of the sacred female.
For what a woman wants,
A woman never reveals.


But the allure of the game,
Keeps on calling my name.
No words are spoken,
But they beckon all the same.


For retreat is the only way,
For one to truly lose.
Throwing arms in this battle,
Is thus tying the knoose.


Eyes are always upon you,
For the right mistake.
Yet I keep to the shadows,
For my tattered soul's sake.


Too many times,
have I been left behind.
Thought to be nothing,
Do I look so blind?


Or deaf; maybe so,
But never so dumb.
As to let them corrupt,
'Till the heart has gone numb.


In this moment of silence,
I come in from above.
I give you my kindness,
This shelter of Love.



Yet you hide from my side,
Was I ever alive?
The corrupt win them over,
For I'm Too Nice to be tried.


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 Reviews of "moment of silence"
Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on February 23, 2004
Ah the mystery of women?!!!...similarly men are a mystery to me!!!!Enjoyed this immensly...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2004
Excellent write!

Reviewed on February 23, 2004
Wonderful verses. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
Thanks for sharing your thoughts...
That's what poetry is all about?
Take care.......

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
well done! glad you're staying ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
Evan,

I hope you would not for
I have come accustome to reading your works.,
This one is awesome to say the lease and where
a muse chooses to verses is never a program be it church
or not {{SMILES}}}}
"Her lips are silent,
For I hold the key.
Already she has abandoned,
All these thoughts to me.



Yet so complex are these minds,
Of the sacred female.
For what a woman wants,
A woman never reveals."

Mystery is she doesnt never know
how to ask for that which she truly
wants i know I know but i just do not know
how to ask...

Excellent Evan!!!!!!!


Many, Loves,
Lady Peg


Reviewed by evan horetsky
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
oh....and I'M NOT LEAVING....that poem was just kinda saying i'm sick of these games...sorry to worry you guys

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
Beautiful write Evan!!

Now tell you not leaving soon okay!!

May God be with you and your restless heart!!

Love and peace to you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
Evan...there is not a thing wrong with this poem...it has lovely moving thoughts in it...great writing..I guess the sermon was bad
today Huh? ((grin)) floria


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