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Only Sixteen
by evan m horetsky → (All Poetry by evan m horetsky)
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Well, I've won, if you could say that,
I've made all the right moves,
Implored correct judgement.

And I believe this is checkmate.

But I'm only sixteen.
I'm only one man, mass produced in this
torrent of diversity.

One single blink of
one single eye
of sweet mother Earth.

This door opened,
but in its wave of luster,
Shut all others before it.

I mean, I'm only sixteen.

I'm no scholar, no gentleman
No "leader of 'men.'"
Yet still you followed me home,
not like a poorly kitten,
You didn't walk among me, but by me.
Like a creature truly to be called "love."

And what if this is something,
I'm only 16.
I don't know where to go from here,
I'm simply stumbling upon the same old rock
that has been missed so much so that
much of it has eroded away.

Well, I'm only sixteen,
but I'll move it,
I'll destroy this despicable wheel of eternal mishaps
And simply start the fire.

For I'm only sixteen,
but i speak thousands.
My breath, my step
divides millions of forks in this future
we hold so truly dear.

This society we follow
and follow, all the while crippling
ourself.

I am sixteen, I am no statistic,
but one point
on one scale that will unbalance the world.

One heart that will beat in a rhythm
echoed to eternity.

Not in parables, or readings,
or groups of followers,
but in the night

These shadows that are thought of
To be natural.
these notions thought to be "fact."

I am only sixteen, but sixteen is a start

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 Reviews of "Only Sixteen"
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
"...simply start the fire"
It only takes a spark, Evan. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Great poem!
Thank you for my review!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
Evan,
Excellent poem
"These shadows that are thought of
To be natural.
these notions thought to be "fact."

I am only sixteen, but sixteen is a start"

Peg

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 26, 2004
wow....i am young again...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Enjoy 16 while you can, it won't last long..
Great writing Evan

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
A great start if you ask me! Welcome to AD! Love your words in the bio, "god is a comedian playing to an audience too afraid to laugh " So very, very true!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
An excellent start.

Reviewed on February 25, 2004
(((evan)))

welcome to author's den, and you're among friends here. :)

and thank carma for introducing us to a wunderkind--what a debut piece!

only sixteen...but writes like a wise old sage

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Very good write, Evan! A very thought provoking and deep write; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Carma:

THanks for allowing me to visit Evan's page; what a talent!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
I still feel sixteen..lol!!

Another very well written piece Evan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Age doesn't matter evan....maturity does...and you
seem to have that...great poem..floria


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