fickle fate (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

I'm so glad you did not hesitate in penning this delightful poem. A very original theme...carried through to the end. Love it...

Micke

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

TOTALLY KNOCKOUT BRILLYANT... HOW DO YOU DO THIS??? THIS IS SO RIGHT UP THE KB ALLEYWAY THAT I AM ALMOST MOVED TO COMMIT IT TO MEMORY... or at the very least to take notes so that I can be a cheapskate copycat... Just my cuppa tea, Darlin. Cheeky and smart! OK, lame if you like. But nope... I'm a useless liar... Brilliant it is, then. Love, Kate xx

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Fun to read and very clever. Great use of personification & vocabulary. Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Dear Anita,

This is one of the most clever poems I've had the pleasure of reading.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Makes sense to me. Like it. Liz

Reviewed by Scott Tacke

Reviewed on January 24, 2008

Lame by no means! Original, inventive, and so very true! The use of personification here was perfect! This is one of those 'truth kernel' witticisms I could clearly see being repeated among people decades from now! Excellent.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

Not lame to me at all!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

A Pax, that's incredible. I love it! Saving it. --Charlie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

I like it; I like it!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

So clever and not "Lame" at all!

Reviewed by dana everhart (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

don't know about lame...but it is cute

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

Anita,

I'm all confused. (lol) After all is said and done does Fate End up with Wait? Sorry bout my confussion Mate. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

You are so clever;-) I enjoyed this unique poem,and always love new ideas,they are what make us poets.

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

kind of a fun write--

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Tania,

Dear, dear Lady A, no poem is lame unless it is not written. This is whimsical, as Fee (below) said, and I'm smiling, even now...reminds me of Who's on first. :) Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

I don't think I would call it lame, I think more of a whimsical verbal puzzle that brought smiles to my face that is for sure.

hugs
Fee