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The Deep Blue's See
by Bonnie M Torrente → (All Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente)
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~   The Deep Blue’s See   ~



 


Soft music in my ears,
Jazz piano playing just the right tune.
Sad lyrics fill a dim, smoky room,
A trombone wails a long, slow moan.
Reaching into the pit of my stomach,
As a double scotch hits home,
Taking me to a place,
Where the deep blue’s see.


 


Those deep down blues,
When only a bottle of Glenlivet will do.
Forego the rocks, make it "neat".
Numb the shock of reality sneaking in.
Get drunk as hell, look it straight in the face,
And wail like that trombone.
There’s no escaping,
When the deep blue’s see.



 


Hide from the truth like an ostrich,
Head buried deep in the sand,
Hidden in plain sight,
Eyes closed and pretending.
 My heart won’t be lied to, indefinitely...
There's no defying or denying,
When the deep blue’s see…



 



copyright©2005 BONNIE TORRENTE



 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "The Deep Blue's See"
Reviewed by Judith Bailey
Reviewed on January 24, 2005
Being in full agreement w/previous comments... only adding that you did as well with the visual as you did with conceptual: this poem is as beautiful to see as it is to read and ponder.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
Very insightful write!

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Absolutely Wonderful! This is Magnificent and so the true feelings. Love the blues band and the trombone with this really added so much to the Blue feelings.
Wonderful
Tracey

Reviewed by John Hutchinson
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Top notch as usual luv-great play on words!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
exceptional mood, imagery and atmosphere ...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Yes you do Bonnie and this one really stands out.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
You sure do know how to hit "home" for me. Great poetry that seeks the soul. Love and peace to you, Bonnie. Regis

Reviewed by The Dove
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
You are an extremly visiual and clever talent. It appears that you have a measure of power over creation because you have managed to fit the whole world in your spirit. And when you realease it , it seems to come out a more beautiful life. Thank you for being born. And God bless your poetry. Peace and be excellent. DOVE

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Very down in the shoesy,bluesy
Fine write on the topic Bonita!

Love,Eileen


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