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Mama Do You Love Me
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~  MAMA DO YOU LOVE ME  ~

Mama do you love me,
I have never heard those words.
If you do then won’t you tell me,
Is it really that absurd?


Why can’t you ever talk to me,
Not only when you’re mad,
I’ve tried so hard to please you,
But I can’t, it makes me sad.


Mama do you love me,
Like you love my brother Jim.
You pushed me far away from you,
While you held onto him.


I know you’ve done the best you could,
And life was hard for you,
But I’m a child, who can’t grow up,
Until we work this through.


Mama do you love me,
You’re old and I’m still near,
Still asking, “do you love me”?
But you’ve grown too deaf to hear.


COPYRIGHT©1997 BONNIE TORRENTE 
 


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 Reviews of "Mama Do You Love Me"
Reviewed by Judith Bailey
Reviewed on June 17, 2003
So many of us spend our lives looking for that love that another person, no matter who, can express just exactly the way or the manner in which we want to hear it. Too often "I love you" is said to us, and we don't hear it because we are only hearing our need. It took me most of my mother's life to get into this understanding, and I'm not sure she ever did, during her life. You've written this piece so very well, Bonnie; I salute your talent, and you.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
I can`t get to my library fast enough this was moving great flow, fine meter and terrific verses with volume ....poem had a hue of sadness but still a tuned in write

Reviewed on May 28, 2003
I felt the sadness of the question. When love goes unspoken we then need to go to the next level of identifying LOVE. My father was a man of few words, yet he worked and supported 13 children. Growing up I longed to hear the words "I love you" yet what I really needed to learn was how to accept the love that was given and how to identify its presence. Love is not comparative. I no longer dictate the love I receive, I've just learned to receive it---or not. God Bless you, you are accepted into the Beloved!

Reviewed by John Hutchinson
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
A sad question that should never have to be asked!

Reviewed on May 11, 2003
This was so moving and heart-breaking, I have seen parents do this, it just isn't right...Excellent expression of a painful emotion,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Very Good and Very True Bonnie, sometimes that which is left unspoken is indeed what we needed to hear the most!
((((Hugs)))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Sometimes the words that are never spoken are the ones that really need to be heard the most.

Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Blest be those whose mothers are loved and cared.

"Mama Do You Love Me" is another striking piece by this meaningful Author.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Awww. How sad. An unfortunate event that will haunt many children in the world. Good expression.
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*


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