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If I Could
by Bonnie M Torrente → (All Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente)
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~ If I Could ~

If I could change a few things in this master minded scheme,
I’d make it so a heaven, would be more than just a dream.
I’d give a glimpse to everyone, so they could know it’s true ,
And have some peace of mind, now that they’ve had a bird’s eye view.

If I could, I’d answer all the questions in your minds,
But I am just like you, another human in the blind.
Bewildered by all life, what waits beyond this global sphere.
What loving maker fills his children full of unknown fears?

If I could, I’d feed the hungry people in despair,
Not another hungry human, in this world or anywhere.
I’d mend the broken people, broken hearts in need of care,
Abolish broken hearts and lose the need for heart repair.

If I could, I’d heal the ailing bodies, minds, and souls,
To happy, healthy beings, living life and feeling whole.
But I am just like you, another human in the blind,
Still, if I could… I’d give us eyes to see past humankind.


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 Reviews of "If I Could"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
well done

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
Keep this up, and one day it may be the lyrics to an award winning song. This was SO nice Bonnie. . .blessin's,

cynth'ya lewis reed
p.s. the people who are SUPPOSED to know you will know you for your heart and not your fame, or lack of. Remember that, for things always take care of themselves if we are sincere and consistently seeking to go the distance.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
very insightful and well crafted ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Beautiful compassionate poetry Bonnie! The old adage "people see only what they want to" comes to mind;-)

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
wonderful thoughts, wonderfully expressed. -- Jeff


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