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Render Me Perfection
by Bonnie M Torrente → (All Poetry by Bonnie M Torrente)
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~ Render Me Perfection ~

Render me perfection, this soul prays unto thee,
Magnificent Creator, I ask you this for me.
I have many prayers, gone adrift somewhere,
Amongst so many others, left to float in dark night air.

Render me perfection, as you have come to be.
Acknowledge your own maker, tell me, who perfected thee.
Why am I not flawless, as you poured the bluest sea,
Pour on me perfection, drench me in your purity.

Render me perfection, let me wander through your gate,
Into your realm of mystery, where answers set in wait.
Do you hear my prayers, in the silence of my plight,
Or do they fall on deaf ears, in the middle of the night.

Energy of all creation, help me understand,
The reason I am tainted, when molded by your hands.
Render me perfection, with the powers you possess,
Proclaiming all you are to me and set my soul to rest...

COPYRIGHT©2004 BONNIE TORRENTE






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 Reviews of "Render Me Perfection"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 23, 2004
well done ... excellent poem!

Reviewed on February 21, 2004
I've always wanted to be perfect as well.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
well written and a beautiful expression!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
I guess Bonnie you long as I do for something we can never be - perfect. I have fallen so far into imperfect by my own will, that I have no thoughts of perfection now - well at least not many. But I know in Heaven there is the perfect One who makes my world of imperfection meaningless. And that is enough isn't it? Bill

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Absolutely terrific. Your best and the plea is one I'm sure regales with many voices. This is superb.
Love,
Susan


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