I like your style
Standing on the corner
Leaning on the pole
She noticed gent a standing
Tall and lean and bold
Chewing gum she eyed him
Mouth turned up with a smile
slowly she approached him
in her sashay style
What ya doing mister?
with pen and pad in hand
I see ya writing something
love letter or perhaps?
Her perfume overwhelming
her lips were ruby red
her skirt hugged hips a swaying
leaning close to him
He said I am a writer
I keep my notebook near
and when the mood does strike me
I want to make things clear
So what ya writing mister
as she nuzzled up real close
something you can show me
its slow right now and cold
He said it’s not quite finished
but I had to write it down
for I do not want to lose them
I’ve learned before and found
So in my pocket carry
small notebook and a pen
and sometimes write a story
if even on a whim
She cozied in much closer
warm breath upon his neck
said, “Can you write me something
for this lady you have met?”
He looked her over carefully
and smiled from head to toe
and shortly starts a scribbling
and set her eyes a glow
He handed her the paper
her eyes on words he wrote
she looked at him a smiling
with hand upon her throat
She handed back his paper
and turned to walk away
with her hips a swaying
she turned to him to say
You really are good mister
and with a wink and smile
I’ll tell you this much mister
I really like your style
Carolee Dennis-Woosley
September 27, 2012
Regis
You have many styles and you know what............
I like them all !!!!!
Yes I like your style(s) Carolee
Mark
world go round and round..
just reach for the brass ring
and become...
Liked your poem very much
*Carolee*
Lady Vivian
Love ya!
Jane
budd
If Virginia Woolf wrote from her experience, and the only thing I know of her is that awful, hateful, dysfunctional drunken performance by Elizabeth Taylor, the poor woman must have had a dreadful life. ;-)
Ron
Diane
Joy L. Hale
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano
Gail
I was sitting in a lounge one day in Shreveport, Louisiana and there were two barmaids working it. One of them caught my eye and I whipped out my pad and trusty pen and jotted down a quick poem which was definitely one that told the woman I admired her. She read it and mumbled her thanks, and I could see that I touched her heart. She let the other barmaid read it and the other one asked if I'd write one for her. I did, but where the first poem was all about beauty and love and very suggestive that I would like to know her better, the second poem was pure poison and it made the second barmaid cry. I could have written her one similar to the first one, but I don't like being pushed into a corner and made to do something that I didn't want to. Excuse me for being long-winded with "my" story.
About your poem, like the woman said, I like your style.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
through their works...thank you,Carol.
Deborah