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Independance
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Independence

 

The roles we play should not be set in stone

But they’re to keep us other than alone.

With lessons, what it means for us to share

And evidence when people truly care.

 

I’m sorry that you can not play along.

Or will not for some reason sing the song

Of love and magic most of us so crave

And I can’t understand how you behave.

 

It’s just a role to play- of needing me

And finding all the things that I can be…

Or yes- reverse- and feel me wanting you

For all that love creates for you to do.

 

But you won’t play- you won’t accept the role,

You think it somehow means that you’re not whole.

So you will miss what all this love is for…

You want your independence? There’s the door.

 

John H. Bidwell


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 Reviews of "Independance"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
POWERFUL message so well written!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Excellent poem.The ending speaks for itself.take care.I enjoy reading it

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Awesome! Been there, said that. Well done John!

Anna

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
A very powerful message! and you know what John I found these words profound, very interesting. Thanks for sharing!

P.S. Thanks for stopping by pleased to meet you John!

Much Love,
Sincerely!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Very sad when we love and it can't be returned ,when one shuns responsibility of life thinking independence is the answer.Most
times they learn it is not. Excellent poem, John!

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
Whew! Definitely a strong message. The door is always an option. Still, the optimist in me hopes and prays that "they'll" get it; the realist is me knows differently.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
Hah! Yes indeed, these words do heed. You don't want to take the game on and deal with the rules, go somewhere and be alone and be a fool. If you can't understand this, please let me bend over and you can kiss . . .


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