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The great disparity
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A personal tale that highlights the horrors of apartheid South Africa from the eyes of a child witness






 


Left alone in that huge house

Servants retired to their own rooms

We heard a knock on the door

Open'd it, saw one of the grooms

 

He was leaning against the doorpost

blood pouring from underneath his hand

Pleading, dark eyes so desperate

He tried to make us understand

 

We didn't need to know

Because in that moment we could see

In his ragged clothes and our luxury

The great disparity…the great disparity

 

We knew our Dad would be angry

but we led him through the door

We wrapped him in a blanket

Then he sank onto the floor

 

My childish fingers dialed for help

I kept screaming into the phone

"Please help him he is dying!"

"We are the only ones at home."

 

The operator seemed so patient

Questions she really had to ask

"What colour is he sweetheart?"

"Oh black?" …came up the mask

 

"Call another number dear.

We can't help him here you see."

In that moment I could clearly see

the great disparity…the great disparity

 

I'll never forget that dreadful night

His dying eyes still stare at me

You see he never understood

The great disparity…the great disparity


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 Reviews of "The great disparity"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 6, 2005
No words are needed. You have expressed it all in black and white. Love.

Regis

Reviewed on June 26, 2004
This is a grandiloquent social poem. "The great disparity" is a true story of a reality created and supported by those that preached love one another.

I heard Your message, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Anthony Hall
Reviewed on June 24, 2004
Chanti - another poignant write! Glad to have discovered your thought provoking poetry. Looking forward to reading more of your work. I invite you to read 'The Spook Who Sat by the Door' and 'Man of War' - 2 poems of mine that you may find interesting.

Anthony

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
An exceptional write that details the ignorance that mankind has based on the pigment of ones skin....well done.
Allen

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
wonderful poem wonderfully crafted.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Powerful piece and so sad.
So very enlightning.
Welcome Chanti ;)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Well this is beautifully written! a most
disturbing topic. One that needs to be told!


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