I received this in response to my 'Dreamer Child' and was so touched by it I wanted to share it here. This is written by a very special person. I will forward all responses to the poet who penned it for me.
Chanti, this is so beautiful and so true. As a "dreamer child" myself, I have over the years seen my life come to this day, when my dreams have finally taken on ripe fruit. I still dream, but now for the man I wish I could call mine. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
Both are seamlessly woven and are like a two-part song, a duet of hope and encouragement. Honesty and gentleness are irresistible and those whose words and actions in life remind others of the lives of angels reap an angel's response! :)) 'Tis but the law of reciprocation and whatever is given is amply returned. May you truly be blessed one-hundred fold for your gaciousness and kindness. You light up the Den. Bless you, Kate xx
This was absolutely perfect. Your responder has summed up life in a nutshell in four perfect verses. This is so smoothe and very well penned. May you both always be protected from that jagged edge.
Enchanting, beautiful piece--please thank the author for penning this work, and thank YOU for sharing their talent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2005
Such a multitude of feelings throughout this poem. The path for goodness has been trod and the grasses of turmoil have been flattened for this dreamer child to run her life without fear. Very good.
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
"if I have to...Then I may as well be."
Well Penned
William ....Peace & Love
just what are displayed
you and the respones
we have wonderful people here don't we!!!
enjoyed both pieces
take care
Love Tinka
Best wishes
Enchanting, beautiful piece--please thank the author for penning this work, and thank YOU for sharing their talent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Felix
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