There is sight beyond our physical eyes, knowledge beyond our accumulated wisdom, existence beyond our mortal lives.
Swallowed by stars Fallen through space Afloat in a vast cosmic sea of unstable elements I am detached. Yet, I feel connected by energy (or is it light?) to a force that draws me, that is compelling in its intensity. Reaching beyond my mind and the physical confines of my earthly existence A vast distance is spanned in a mysterious and magnificent fusion of souls.
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Reviews of "Soul Tie"
Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2006
A beautiful write and a truth told in wonderful poetry. Concise and wondrous.
Love it,
simon
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2005
A vast distance is spanned
in a mysterious and magnificent
fusion of souls.
..you have just described the Twin Flame connection YAY!!!!
I agree with Sherry, Chanti. This is a magnificent topic, and one I wish to the core of my soul, that more people would become aware of. My soul screams for love and acceptance, and except for here and a few online friends, I have no love, no acceptance, no happiness. I laugh, such a hollow laugh tho, that if it could echo, would. Thnx for sharing, Chanti. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Chati, how did you do this? I've written a hundred times around this topic, but you've gone to the core. I love it! your words express so much of the mystery and wonder I think many of us feel when we are at our truest, most authentic selves. plastering imaginary gold and silver stars all over this page, Dawn
I think that love feels just as you describe...like you are floating, your heart is drifting on a sea of intensity...this is a marvelous piece Chanti. Blessings, Michelle
The light becomes brighter when twin souls merge. This is outstanding writing with a profound message born of tender romance.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
Nice writing and the element of the great beyond and the possibility of our souls being there is a great concept. I'd lose the word "Seemingly." Hope you don't mind a little tweaking.
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Love it,
simon
in a mysterious and magnificent
fusion of souls.
..you have just described the Twin Flame connection YAY!!!!
Love it!!
saved it!!
Vesna:)
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Paul;-)
This one has a fantastic molecular structure.
gratified to read your beautiful poems again
Masood
Stunning feel to this one!!
Love Tinka
Lovely write Chanti...
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
peace and love, Carole
Love you lots,
Tami
Take care,
Sherry
Love & Light,
Joseph