We dined like royalty in Venice toured hand-in-hand through Rome We walked the streets of Paris in a journey far from home From the skyline of New York with its Statue of Liberty To the city lights of Vegas and from the desert to the sea We’ve shared such adventure and seen so many things Hurtled from a building and flown without our wings. From the pavements to the stratosphere, filled with adrenalin We experienced heaven in a world that's ours to win. ã Chanti 2006
Wow- this flowed easily and I could see the excitement while you wrote it Chanti~ What Blessings that you got to experience all this and with someone special! What a Blessing of memories to hold in your heart forever! I loved this poem! I see all this on the Travel chann... lol- Wish it was a reality! Ahhhhhhhh... The Peace you must have felt! WArm HuGs*She*oxo
What a trip this poem is, Chanti! A roadmap of many destinations and you are holding the winning poker chips of life. Champagne wishes and caviar dreams, baby! Bubbly write!
Next time, call me and I'll get you luxury accomodations as an author Sis Chanti! Sounds like a wonderful memory of which we will hear more poetic sonnets under your name.
blessin's to you,
cynth'ya
Forget that guy Bolton, I would be more fun to have along, and I can grovel quite well too...take me and Rufuz next time, he is a great watch dog...glad you had a great time, hate to be jealous, but damn I wish it were me...LOL, Ed & Rufuz
I hear such a wonderful excitement about your trip in this brief poem. But more than anything, I hear the excitment of your heart in this excellent last line.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
great melody too :)
pax A
Business and pleasure...sounds more like pleasure. Good on you! A lovely time I had, reading your words. Bless you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Sage
Hi Chanti...
Love Tinka
blessin's to you,
cynth'ya
Felix
My love to you,
Tami
Take care,
Sherry
love and peace...
Carole
Regis