The painting is my own creation that I entitled 'The Lovers'
THE CRADLE OF SHAPE
Move profoundly into me
like an inspired thought.
Shift my sands
with your currents
that ebb and flow
with the power
to shape rock.
Sing with me
to the melody
of our beating hearts.
Hold me close
in the cradle
of your shape
- a shape
that fits like a piece
made for my shape alone.
Melt into me
like candle wax
under the flame
of our heat.
Know me...
Intimately
Inside and out.
Race with me
within the quickened
pulse of our blood
For we are
an intricate design
set in the frame
of our love.
Chanti,
I just discovered your work. I am going to read more and comment later, this poem is incredible sensual and very beautiful..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
YOu pain Beautifully and intimitely Chanti!
I loved it and your poem, speaks love clearly!
Enjoy all it's WONDERFUL and Amazing Blessings!
* Glad to see you are BETTER! Healing STronger daily!
Enjoy your week ahead in much inspiration! Love your new Bio page too!
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Lady SheeeOOX
Perfection in both the artwork, which I loved and the write :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2007
Yes, I am back thank you, Chanti . . . the poem is superb in its ritual telling of amor empowering and all-encompasing, just as your painting, which I understand completely, is saying the lovers meet the other in convuluted ecstasy . . . gotta love it . . .
Wow...This is so beautiful Chants! I'm really at a loss for words...You are such an incredible woman and I am one very lucky guy!!! This really made my day...Thanks. You continue to amaze me with your talent.
Claudius Cuddlechops
Conservator of Fine Art
National Museum of Endless Snuggles
Absolutely beautiful words to your love, I am sure he appreciates it, and |I must say your art work is fantastic. Thank you for sharing both.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Great poem, and I like your art even though I don't go for modern type much. Your poem depicts love perfectly. Victor
Yes Chanti I can see this perfect image of art and how well it compliments the poem that you write with love and adoration for the man in your life. Both are first class...
Fee
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2007
Visual in two senses. Fantastic write Chanti. Thanks for sharing.
The first and last lines are so perfectly thought -- your language of love is original. And yet another serious writer who can do her own artwork. I will read more.
This is superb - the painting is beautiful, as is the poetry - really loved 'the cradle of your shape' - what a fine fine poem, poem to be proud of i reckon :o) Nicky x
The poem moves like the two bodies it is a projection of; and it makes the act not just one of flesh but also of soul. I guess this is what "soulmate" means.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
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Ed
'Scuse me but I gotta laugh at Edwin. He sound really Gaa Gaa, and who could blame him, Poor lad...LOL
Walt
I just discovered your work. I am going to read more and comment later, this poem is incredible sensual and very beautiful..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Hugs,
Tami
I loved it and your poem, speaks love clearly!
Enjoy all it's WONDERFUL and Amazing Blessings!
* Glad to see you are BETTER! Healing STronger daily!
Enjoy your week ahead in much inspiration! Love your new Bio page too!
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Lady SheeeOOX
STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
Claudius Cuddlechops
Conservator of Fine Art
National Museum of Endless Snuggles
Love Tinka
George
A lovely poem.
Georg
This is gorgeously shaped and imaged, powerfully penned excellence. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla/.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Be safe,
Karen
Fee
to shape rock.
Sing with me"..great lines
stan