the Ten Commandments, five positive and five negative (the original five are of what to do and the rest what not to do in order to die a natural death), I smell here, in this piece filled up with a sound enthusiasm in general, which is a good sign to me. It does rhyme well and read smoothly to be a sight for sore eyes. . . thank you for completing this, John. Cheers, alex
It feels like… With my fingers. ;-) I'll put all my feelers and see what I'm feeling.
An interesting group of questions in an interesting poetic construction. Enjoyed. However, some of the second lines seem to be a bit forced and the sequence might have been a little bit differently ordered. Maybe not.
Oh, how forever this list could go on! Forgive me but you sent me wondering how one might describe how "a certain thing" feels. Anyhow, I had fun wondering! Thank you for this "brain exercise"!!
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
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An interesting group of questions in an interesting poetic construction. Enjoyed. However, some of the second lines seem to be a bit forced and the sequence might have been a little bit differently ordered. Maybe not.
Ron
Michael D.
Love ya!
Jane