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No One Dies Alone
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Wednesday, October 5, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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No One Dies Alone
By John Herlihy

The scene has been repeated for thousands of years;
The body lay supine, eyes no longer have room for tears.
The life has been lived; all is now said and done;
The ball of yarn has unraveled; the web of life is spun.
A beaded curtain in the room rustled, sounding like rain;
All of nature utters sounds without seeming to complain.
The candles flicker, the light has dimmed;
The breath is shallow; the blood has thinned.
We breathe all our lives; we take the air for granted;
In our dying moment, the final breath is scented.
With actions that make up the deeds of a lifetime,
One destiny in which even the darkness did shine.

The breath now labored, the struggle has begun;
One last breath to inhale; one final note to be sung.
No one dies alone, the angel of death is always there;
On eternity’s horizon, counting seconds left to spare.
One breath we are here; the final breath we are gone;
Slipped into another dimension where we now belong.
The final breath has extinguished, the body grows cold;
Life’s candle snuffed out, the soul is no longer old.
It rises upward and upward still on uplifted hands;
Light as a feather, the weight of the world disbands.
No one dies alone; death only an invitation brings;
Hand-delivered by an angel with extended wings.

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 6, 2016
Your metaphoric Death Angel is very strong in this, overly descriptive poem about what you call, "the last breath." I have never observed anyone dying, so it's hard for me to comment on your detailed descriptions, but my twin brother has when the man in the next hospital bed died. He told me that there was a lot of noise coming from the man and he was choking and then there was a lot of commotion with doctors coming in before the man gave up and died. I have also heard of people dying peacefully in their sleep. I do not know if they are dreaming or they just die in such a situation. No one is there to tell.

I just can't buy the idea of an angel of death, it is just a biblical expression to me.

Ron

Reviewed on October 6, 2016
Unfortunately, I was looking right at one of my brothers when he died. Finally, that soul was free to enter the new dimension. Weird scene, though. How easily he slipped away but not alone. Any other death would be the same in some sense. I'd rather die alone. I don't want people standing around me digging my experience. They would not understand what I was seeing.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 6, 2016
When we take that final breath, the last great mystery begins.
Michael D.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 6, 2016
Beautifully phrased. Having never considered the last breath this way, it was double the pleasure in reading this lyrical treatment of both life and death.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 6, 2016
Catching that last breath . . . Some fight it . . . Some are resigned to it . . . Matters not . . . It happens anyway!

Reviewed on October 6, 2016
'fly robin, fly. . . up up to the sky. . .' a very strong poem in the sense that there is no death but 'the slipping into another dimension where we now belong.' Again, death is the men's invention to discriminate one thing/being from another. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 6, 2016
Powerful poetry


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