First ages still lie deep within us,
Magical because primordial and more.
First traditions still linger to shape our lives,
With trust in God and faith in our own store.
The gift of greatness extends far back in time,
Silence exists in that hour and still exists in mine.
Whispered insights heard from such starkness,
Revelatory words herald the eternal darkness.
Primitive impulses still echo within us,
Hollow inside the drum despite our might
Because the darkness hovers deep within us.
We are still fascinated by the glowing light
We continue to struggle with life’s mystery,
Because the secret lies buried within us.
We endeavor to unravel the vast unknown,
An unseen world that lies buried within us.
Brutal instincts still as familiar as they are old;
They rise up to the surface when they are told.
Despite thousands of years of human evolution;
Humanity still has not arrived at a firm resolution.
To the perennial challenge arising from first ages,
As if we learned nothing from turning the pages.
And what on earth is it we are expected to know,
To capture the secret before it dissolves like snow.
The silence now remains as a reverence with us,
Containing all the sounds that we have ever heard.
Sepulchral thoughts reveal their presence within us,
Diabolic love and unearthly hate with edges blurred.
In today’s world we wish to accomplish great things,
Without having any idea what the day truly brings.
We wish potentates and kings to meet us in person;
Innerly, we have no truth, our qualities only worsen.
We need to revisit the ancient mystique of first ages,
As darkness and light bled into a sea of time in stages.
Back to a time with instincts brutal and passions raw,
The world had yet to unfold, no events that anyone saw.
The earth was still unearthly, just filling empty spaces,
Without the thrilling attractions of lusty, exotic places.
The night of first ages witnessed stars in their first glow;
Let us visit those ages again, their pure memory to bestow.
This reminded me, in certain ways, of Arthur C. Clarke. I also perceived hot sand, sand clouds, and sand devils, in this ecumenical philosophizing. Enjoyed. r
there are so many great points and queries in these five stanzas that only a man with high insight (also known as a sage) is able to decode them or put forth, giving appropriate answers. I also try to persuade people to use their bodies as an instrument in their research the worldly things around and to finally set the painting curtain ajar, on which a pot on fire is pictured tastefully. Yes, this world is plain and one-dimensioned if we do not activate our inner resources bestowed upon us to use. A huge piece, again. Cheers, alex
Brutal instincts just about says it all. We're barely out of the jungle. Our civilized behavior is nothing more than a veneer. With those primitive instincts still intact, mankind remains a very superstitious lot.
"Primitive impulses still echo within us,"..........I agree as those impulses are part of our very makeup, the micro fiber of our very unique being. Let me drift away!
Overpowering poetry! You wrote in you own distinct style many, many things which I went through for many years of my life. Trying to find where I was to be in this world. Of course I wasn't as poetically astute and thought the exact ways you wrote about, but nevertheless you nailed how I was in those wild and frantic days. Very, very good penmanship here.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
Rebecca
Love ya!
Jane