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That ain't no love, baby!"
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Small boy eating a popsicle
walks into room were grown ups sit
playing a round of spades
talking about how he did her wrong
how she did him wrong,
how that aint no love
Auntie Pam, very young, asks
for a taste of boy's popsicle
bites it down to his fingers, still talking
bout who did who wrong
boy looks at his popsicle,
then at Aunt Pam, and exclaims
"you ate the whole thing,
that aint no love, baby!"

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 Reviews of "That ain't no love, baby!""
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
wow....cute little fantastic write!!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Excellent point made and well taken. Delightful write. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2004
This is so cute, gave me a real laugh.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2004
lolol- that's great, just like kids- and the other good part about this poem is the strong images in gets across in a small space. Well-done!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
This is too cute, Denise. Bet that's the last time he shares HIS popsicle!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
This was too cute. LOL !

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
Exactly why I don't share my popsicles! -- Jeff


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