Arrived (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Arrived
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For those of you that were interested, or just NOSY, like Katy W, Rene did arrive the other day, late, but in excellent form, find out about it in this poem...ed
Arrived… Arrived she did, on the back of a flowing white steed Arrived she did, bringing to him exactly what he did need, Her companionship and love more than what he could have asked for Her kisses and hugs too numerous to keep up with the score, Late she may have been but life she did bring Late was she to arrive, but on her lips a song she did sing, She sang of their love, their resolute desire for each other She rang all his chimes, her resolution a fire for this significant other, She brought herself, her whole self and nothing more, He took her, herself, her whole self and everything more… © ed ~ 8/25/04

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Have you ever heard of a simple yes or no, Eddie M? Nah, didn't think so... AND... that's a good thing! else, I wouldn't have been able to read this truly lovely poem. It's sweeeeeeeeeeeet! (smile) katy xox. p.s. smooching is good for your health! I should know!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Awwwwwwww..splendid...divine...ahhhhhh!!

Love Tinkaaaa!!:)))

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

oh, this is so very beautiful...and that ending just sealed it all up perfectly. Very, very nice write!

Ann

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Priceless poetry Ed! Outstanding creation my friend. Peace thru letting her know how much she means!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Wonderful reunion! So happy for you :-)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

glad your rene' returned safe and sound! nice to know!

i once didn't get home until three in the morning, and i neglected to let my family know. they were NOT happy. i got grounded. I was not happy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Sue Hess

lovely followup to your late complaint...it shows you know what is important

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

(((ed)))

i'm glad :) beautiful write--

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Better late than never and with this kind of homecoming your poem is appropriately a thank you to her in more ways than one! Excellent!
susan.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Late she may have been but life she did bring

Life, my friend, is always worth waiting for! Great poem, too!!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

I'm glad she arrived. Good for you. Wonderful write this is!

Sandie May Angel