Lets go to the beach, dad…by Rufuz (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 12, 2008

Rufus,
Ha ha Bark a little, that'll get him up. As for the bad words...shhhhhh....your secrets safe with me:) Have FUN!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse

Reviewed on September 11, 2008

Nice! There's always the bus but that could take half-a-day and how old is the son? Isn't it true that some days are perfect for the beach or the mountains, anywhere close to nature and away from streets and mechanical noise.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Have fun Rufie!!

Love AUntie sTinky

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Great day to you Rufuz and Ed. I'd love to be there at the beach with you today. Warmest waters this time of year. Jump in and swim Rufuz, enjoy'''

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

I don't blame Rufus, if it is a nice day you should be up and about and taking your little buddy to the beach like he wants.

Fee

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Enjoy your day Rufuz and you and Daddy stay safe.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Dad. Please. Your little boy wants to go to the beach! Later you sleep, less time you have before the storms roll in. As my T.I. in basic used to say, MOVE IT MOVE IT MOVE IT! LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Chew one of his big toes, that will get him up and running!
And for those &#*%&£$ words...ain't telling nutin'

Uncle Ed

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Rufuz has a mind of his own. If he could only figure out a way to get dad out of bed....

George

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Heehee!!! Rufuz is sure poetic!!! You can whip out rhyming poems so effortlessly each time I read.

You take care of your daddy well and you two have lots of fun!

Hugs,

Aunt Sandie :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Dammit to hell, (sorry ladies), get up you lazy bum, and take Rufie for a walk! And find some more coins on that beach; you still owe me - big time!

Was that OK, Rufie Boy?

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Ok Dad come on listen up and head to the beach, keep Rufuz happy and cool. Great write, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Rufuz my dear, lick daddy's nose, if that doesn't work, do what my Nika (Newfie)does, bellow in his ear. Oh poor daddy...Maybe not bellow Rufuz, try just the licking, that definately works. Good poem Rufuz, but no more cussing. Love ya, Dr. Bonnie

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

I closed my pool some years back so my dog Mac never got to know how refreshing a daily swim can be.

Reviewed by Valerie Roeske

Reviewed on September 9, 2008

Ed,
Loved this write, funny thing the other day I couldn't pry my son away from the beach, Take care valerie