Ed, God bless you for revising "On Ocean's Edge;" I have the greatest respect for you.
This one is a fun poem... The references to your "nubile young bodies" and then "Laughing at oldsters" gives it a touch of sad reminiscence.
I love the 2 ending lines, "Building sand castles, Living so far from life's hassles...
She never felt safe at home as a young girl, and didn't understand why when she finally escaped she wasn't safe in the big wide world either ...effectively jumping out of the frying pan into the fire!
Love ya!
Jane
WOW! Are you and old Cuz Cur tripping again??!!
when was this recently
or were you reminiscing?
any kool write most enjoyable
Peace be with you Brother
William
budd
Ron
This one is a fun poem... The references to your "nubile young bodies" and then "Laughing at oldsters" gives it a touch of sad reminiscence.
I love the 2 ending lines, "Building sand castles, Living so far from life's hassles...
Hugs,
Connie