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Time To End The Story
by Crystal-Rain Love → (All Poetry by Crystal-Rain Love)
  
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What once was so bright, alive and vivid

Has faded into a blurred image,

A mere memory hanging on for nostalgia’s sake.

The struggle to hold on has grown too tiresome.

I feel the need to open my hands

And let it fly free.

I knew in my heart that he was the one

I thought that fact would hold true

We have changed so much with the passing of time

This man that once was part of me,

Has now become almost a stranger.

I don’t understand why it still hurts

Leaving should feel so exhilarating

Yet I still feel the pain of loss,

As if part of me is dying.

But the flame has burned out

And I’ve lost the desire to rekindle it.

It’s time to amputate for the sake of us both,

Cutting one another free,

Before we both die from the misery.

Although it started with two young lovers,

And there was magic along the way,

This story won’t have a happy ending,

Because this isn’t a fairy tale,

But instead, our reality.


 


copyright(c)2004 Crystal-Rain Love 






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 Reviews of "Time To End The Story"
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
The pain of loss. Beautiful write

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2004
So sad and deeply honest emotions. Grips the heart with raw pain.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
very sad, but beautiful...

Rodd

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
sad sad write...heart touching write....love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
This is painfully harsh in its realism but it expresses an angst and so much truth for many relationships. Thank you for this wonderful offering, Rain. Much love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
this is a painful one.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
Soon as I saw your name thouht, hey ho great write here, surely is..

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
This is a brutal truth of life. I went through this and it hurted like hell until I accepted the fact that me and her was over. Time does have a way of lessening the pain when we let go of what we can't have.

Best wishes

Reviewed on January 26, 2004
wow! powerful, heartfelt poem; thanks for sharing, crystal-rain!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
It is sad but somethings this is the way it ends but cutting loose before any real damage is done is extremely wise. Great write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
Crystal I felt this poem...one door shuts and another door opens...and life goes on...blessings to you...floria

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
Sof often the case innit mate, tis for me too, ne'er mind, we are survivors, we woman are built to conquer. Here's my fav quote, Women dont get hot flushes, they get power surges :):)
Love n hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
This is so well expressed!

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2004
oh I know this story..the hard part is the amputation,even when the feelings are dead,it still hurts..seems like many have been here

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on January 25, 2004
WOW! Harsh truth hits home. I definitely relate strongly to this feeling! -- Jeff


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