Wow, Bill. What a terrific story. This is an edge of the seat thriller and like a true master, you've left it to your readers to fill in what happens next. Brilliant work, my friend!
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Bill:
Balancing one man and another. Swapping back and forth - so brief, so full. Gave me an awful chill. Your aftermath actually gives rise to the suspense beforehand left unsaid. Wonderful writing.
Peaked my curiosity with the title...hmmm. Then the bag, what's in the bag? Or was it empty awaiting....the body!!! The plot thickens...what a write! Well done my friend, so much said and yet much unsaid allowing the imagination to run wild...room enough for part II. One of my favorites! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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Love,
CJ
Balancing one man and another. Swapping back and forth - so brief, so full. Gave me an awful chill. Your aftermath actually gives rise to the suspense beforehand left unsaid. Wonderful writing.
hugs,
kathy
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Carole~
Love,
Taylor
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Yes, WOW!!! a very good one.
Georg