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Minutes To Change
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It isn't anything but Nature.



Minutes to Change


Within two minutes it happened
and in seconds they knew truth

that four surprised parents
would have to be told all

and that pain would come
from not being more realistic

with tow hormone enriched
offspring playing o no rules

They became living bomb.
waiting for a fuse to light

to reach powder with sperm
and egg changing many lives

The daughter is now with child
after two went past common sense

In two minutes the parents knew
the who the when and agreeing to

a marriage as the thing to be done
while lives are changed dramatically

because parents won't believe that
active sex is a topic not to be ignored


2007 F William Broome


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 Reviews of "Minutes To Change"
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Looking back on my teenage pregnancy...
I never blamed my parents, maybe because at that time, the subject was too difficult for them to express. I can honestly say, I hadn't a clue what I was doing! I was too naive and oblivious to a future and second-thoughts didn't even exist.
Like your poem, and more informative subjects and matters, such as this ,are now offered to young adults and their parents.
There's a little better count going on between those "Minutes to Change", but obviously not enough...
Fabulous write!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Bill, you are so right. There are so many parents out there who fail to address the hard issues with their children. By the time those two minutes are over, only then do they realize it's too late. This is a didactic write that all parents and anyone who considers raising a child must heed! The "living bomb" similie is as accurate as any I have ever seen. Thanks for sharing this essential lesson in life in poetic form!
~Butch Howard

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Dear Bill:

The content is the beginning of many a life, not ready to be, but I am always drawn by lines like this:

childlike as a mature living bomb.

says it all.

hugs,
Kathy




Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
You know I've been there and done that... I look at my granddaughter and of course I love her to death but I also know how difficult it was for all involved.. funny how in the time it took to say oops it was all over and fate sealed....

M

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
A write full of wisdom my friend...you've expressed this with a sincere voice from the heart. A write and a part of life that many parents can relate to, parents from years ago, parents of today as will parents of tomorrow.
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Good write, Bill,

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Barbara Mercer
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Sad but true and your honesty to wtite about it. Brave and honest write in so few words. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}} Barbara

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Hey your voice is greatly appreicated!!! Keep poetry alive......


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