however butts in
just when my best point is made
gross discourtesy
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better
it can't be better
than the yesterday we spent
impossible to
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friends
from all minuses
and pluses over the years
a few friends remain
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operatic
poetry blends well
with those determined to fill
love's empty pages
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Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
This is excellent. I particularly like the last one! Poetry is the perfect vehicle to "fill love's empty pages...."
"for those who care enough to send the very best."
Well done!
~Butch Howard
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"for those who care enough to send the very best."
Well done!
~Butch Howard
A must. However, better friends [are] operatic.
A beautiful sentiment and worth keeping this in the forefront of our minds.
God bless you. Kathy
M
Carole~
Walt
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love,
Susan