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Bits Of Promise
by F William (Bill) Broome → (All Poetry by F William (Bill) Broome)
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Bits Of Promise

-A brisk winter feel
----- wind combing trees

- The cheery phone call
----- youngish new friend

- Lovely notes exchanged
------ saying right things

- Our next time going out
----- she sits a lot closer

- Invited to her place
----- two doing supper

- She had put away
----- all of his photos

- Close hello hugging
----- long parting kisses


F William Broome 2008

 

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 Reviews of "Bits Of Promise"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Umm, I like the way the cool beginning contrasts with the warm ending, intimating more to come. Lovely expression of two concentric circles making a gentle approach.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
very nice write here--i agree-timing is important and you state it well
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
It's about timing and know when it's right...and realizing when it's not.. Good one here, my friend... M
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Two steps forward and a huge leap. It's all aligned in poetry.
Love and blessinsg.
Susan
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Sounds like cupid is in the air a few weeks early but the warmth of heart of this write holds such a cherry hope of promise.

Fee
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
A tale of new love. Very well done. "Close hello hugging---long parting kisses". A serious love? Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Beautiful write!!!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Bits Of Promise in lines that leave a lot to the imagination, filled with hope of things that may be. Well done, Bill.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
As I read this, I imagined each line in my mind. The title is excellent, because it's just that...filled with promise. I am such a fan of your work!
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