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Is The Remembering My Penalty
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Is The Remembering My Penalty

Spring arrives with little girl shyness
My walks get longer and lonelier
Beauty is cradled in buds of unborn blossoms
I stroll in gray dullness and remember
What you were wearing on the day we parted
I remember your always coordinated colors
And stylish footwear from Paris
Now they are a part of every woman I see
Your voice is clear and final saying good bye
But in your eyes were words never spoken
I wanted to hear them keep you with me
We went on our way with no more words
My nights now are imagining another man
Holding whispering kissing going beyond
Until my demons of who is with you
Take over my nights and block thinking
While knowing the fault is all mine
I still ask - Is the remembering my penalty


F William Broome 2008


 

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Reviewed on February 17, 2008
The opening line captivates, draws the reader in to an emotional ride in verse - excellently penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
I, personally, dislike the word penalty. I prefer consequence. To never have loved would be a penalty for not taking chances. Sometimes our 'winning' is short-lived, but the beauty of the memories warm my days and nights. I choose to focus on the beauty of what was, instead of letting the the 'what ifs' eat me up. I am hoping that since this isn't a memoir - that it is a wonderful testament to your writing ability.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
...for no penalty...in remembering one loved...but of unfortunate fault...one blames himself.
well penned honest emotion William...
John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Penance wears many guises. Guilt is a veiled lady, waiting to be seen. Jon Michael willey

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Beautiful write my friend, many emotions can be felt while reading...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
As long as you have your memories, no one can do harm to your past...ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Bill, this is so beautifully written and the words, the thoughts are put together so well. Sad, and filled with longing...the title, excellent!


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