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Fresh Bait
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Fresh Bait

Self sufficient on my own
eligible bachelor
educated perhaps attractive
cock of the walk
until she moves to town
wearing frilly frocks
sandals shorts and halter
cleavage belly-button
an air of knowing about things
only a pretty thing until we meet
this complete woman
engaging voice soft and clear
eyes sparkling a telling
radiant face bright dialog
giving off an air of catch me
... and you can


F William Broome 2003-08


 

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 Reviews of "Fresh Bait"
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Don't take on more than you can handle, still, go for it...e

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Well, seems she caught your eyes and peaked your interest....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
:)) Keenly observed, I believe, William! I would also love to twitch a few net curtains to watch these two in their flirtatious courtship! Spring is definitely in the air in your Jack-the-Lad and Jill-the-Ladette neck of the woods! Love the puffed-up feathers you paint here. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
it seems the hunter, done got hunted down...

dan

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
You got to love this kind of gal...

Carole~

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Now this is a woman! She knows who she is and makes no excuse for it...we call it being comfortable in your skin. And she knows what to do with it...lol
M

Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Wow! wonderfully coined! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on March 12, 2008
An excellent poem, Bill, shows we're not in charge as much as we think we are - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Excellant write my friend, I can feel the playful kittenish attitude of this woman/child and the excitment of the chase to come. Enjoyed and I know you will too.
Fee

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
Self asssurance must always be tempered by some occasional self doubt. Lest we become arrogant fools. Great story Bill. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
yeah--we think we have it together until someone throws in a monkey wrench!! enjoyed!


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