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Neighbors
by F William (Bill) Broome → (All Poetry by F William (Bill) Broome)
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Neighbors

They waited more than a month to wave.
It was on a Sunday that they rang our door bell.
At three in the afternoon, without notice, they visit.
After an hour of family lore, and local tall tales,
they got up to leave, refusing dessert and drink.
They lived across the street, so they walked home.
Not one question from then about us. No interest.
They were a couple in their fifties and long married.
When they left, we knew a good bit about them;
their family, children, illnesses, deaths of unknowns,
and we knew that they liked us.

We had been warned that mountain people were
strange and kept to themselves. Our neighbors were
more than that. They were all we'd ever herd about,
and they let us know acceptance by asking us to
come over to see them on Saturday, so the four of
us could pick some greens, beans, and yellow
squash. She adds that the tomatoes might be
about ready by then. He turns to me, and in a low
man-to- man manner, he adds that while the
women folks were washing the garden vittles,
the two of us might walk down to the creek and
pull that gallon jug up out of the cold water, to
pour out a stiff one or two... that is..... if I was
a drinking man, and be a might thirsty by then.


F William Broome 2008

 

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 Reviews of "Neighbors"
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
Comforting - like a walk by the creek. :) Well done, Bill.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
LOL because I'm with Dan.. I want to know if you went to the creek!! Great bit of story-telling, my friend..
love, Myrna

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
What a great story, loved it! By the way, did you walk down to the creek?

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
i love the down home feel to this

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Do you live in Black Ash and perhaps we've just kept missing each other all this time?

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
An interesting tale--that reflects folk other than mountain people. I look at it from a different perspective--sometimes people are hungry for someone to talk to and end up monopolizing a conversation, but they will love you for listening. (We write--they talk.)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Sounds like my kinda of neighbours and the way you tell this sounds like we are sitting there listening to you tell us about them.

Fee

Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Bill,
Excellent short story that set up my imagination fast. Well done!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Bill, you are so good at these...these slices of life. It all plays out in my mind like a short film. Wonderful!


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