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Losing It
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Losing It

My getting there was never a problem
until that last birthday when a drivers'
license testing lady and her machine
ruled that I wasn't qualified to drive
due to chronic eyesight delinquency

I had seen it coming so the blow was
not hard to take since my eyes were
suffering from macular degeneration
That's medical talk for near blindness
leaving enough sight to get it done

After driving since 14 - I was without
a way to go and return when I wanted
and that took adjusting to the time
others could take and bring me back
Their kindness is a highlight in life

Telling all of this to friends recently
I said that the loss was a lot like losing
my manhood - to which one woman
objected to the comparison - my reply
~ And I notice that you are not a man


F William Broome 2008



 

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 Reviews of "Losing It"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
Sir Bill, One of the highest quality of a man (or woman) is to know how to adjust to adverse situations. It does not matter that you will not drive, we will still benefit from your wonderful gift... twisting and turning mere words into gold.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
Dear Bill, you remain one of the bright, all seeing members
of the Den, and a man I am proud to call friend. With love, gene.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
The fear of changes as we age goes through everyone's mind, but it certainly doesn't change who we are inside...
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
Sweet Myrna - You're right. It's a guy thing, a part I believe, of our 'conquering hero; make-up.
It's a man's equivalent of the 'girl things,' and nothing else. Love ya' - Bill

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
I do understand the frustration but as I've always said I was one of the lucky ones who lost her sight as an infant... I know nothing else so have nothing to compare it to... but does it make me less of a woman? Hardly...it limits your freedom yes but not who you are.. just my opinion of course..)
love, M

Reviewed on December 29, 2008
That's one of my biggest fears: losing my eyesight. I'd much rather be deaf or without speech than not being able to see. Sorry to hear of this, Bill; you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

And you are NOT any less of a man just because you don't have good eyesight anymore! How stupid can some people be? What that woman said was rude and unacceptable! Shame!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
I can certainly sympathize with you on this one for the same thing happened to my bil about two months after he retired in which he had planned to buy a motor home and travel. Men do have a love for their modes of transportation and turning 16 and getting a licence is one of the turning points of boy to man so you are right in what you say.

fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
I hear ya, Bill...that scares me too, as driving has been my life's work & I do so much enjoy it...I wish you luck in the coming year...Ed & Rufuz [w00f]


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