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Only Houses I See
by Susanne Leist → (All Poetry by Susanne Leist)
Tuesday, September 5, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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ONLY HOUSES I SEE

The new spring blooms colors.

But who even bothers

to breathe the sweet air?

I don’t have a care.

My car fails to start,

a walk in the park.

I raise my small hand.

Gone is the quicksand.

It races down the hill,

the most heavenly thrill.

Shocked faces turn to me.

Only houses I see.


Susanne Leist

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Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on September 6, 2017
Ronald Hull, I found this picture on Tumblr. It is about a witch. So, I decided to write a poem for it. I also wanted to work on my subtext. The girl uses her magic and doesn't care what others think. This idea can relate to anything we do. Other peoples' opinions should never hold us back.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 6, 2017
Some beautiful phrases here. But I'm failing to get the meaning. Perhaps about something that is right there in front of our eyes and we don't see it?

Ron

Reviewed on September 6, 2017
This "you" being from elsewhere, are on one of those levels I visit occasionally. I like this a lot!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 6, 2017
Interesting write.

Reviewed by Susan O'Reilly
Reviewed on September 6, 2017
very nice

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 5, 2017
So much unsaid that makes for a richer input. John

Reviewed by Deborah Shepard
Reviewed on September 5, 2017
great write


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