The Sun awakes
the Moon's dark passion:
"I'm burning for you", she says;
The Sun keeps his cool
but the Air turns blue -
and that is how
A Star Is Born...
Dawn blushes in the afterglow
* * * *
"Honey", the Sun says later,
"If you go playing with fire
you WILL end up getting burned!"
COSMIC CONSPIRACY
The Sun and the Moon conspire...
We shall make love
Who can resist
the Sun's burning kiss,
melting us down,
turning us brown
molten with passion:
The Sun and the Moon conspire...
We shall make love
And who can withstand
the Moon's silken hand
peeling our clothes,
baring our souls,
enjoying our nakedness:
The Sun and the Moon conspire...
We shall make love
ahhhhhhhhhhhh
metaphysically seducted......can't do the old Flip Wilson thing....when Josephine says....The devil made me do it!!!
this is so cool kate of the gifted coat hangers!!!
lol
u know what..........I WISH I WROTE IT!!!
pax..........A
I am still in limbo with my situation.......and going nutz!!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Oh this is so unique, I love this one Kate. A whole galaxy filled with love.
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
These are wonderful. Your choice of words really made it feel like a love affair in the stars. Very creative! Love, Michelle:)
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Kate, you unique talent and brilliant mind can easily whip the planets into their right position in the solar system. It is a rare treat to be able to read your poetical pulsating planetary pleasure. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
You never cease to amaze me Kate, with your incredible poetic offerings. They are all so beautifully composed, these though, must be one of my absolute favourites. Fascinating cosmic realm fantastic poetry Kate.
Kate, you were without a doubt born with a poetic mind !
YOur poetry is unique and always splendid!
I love the concept of the results of sun and moon conjugation!;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Extremely well concieved and delivered! ASTRO-MO-NOG-OMY is my favorite one out of the two, but both deserve an applause!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
My attempt Konstantly Kate.. Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrnddrobwllllantysilliogogogoch.
In other words. Saint Mary's church in the hollow of white hazel near a rapid whirlpool and the church of Saint Tysilio near the red cave...
the sun deals directly with things but the moon prefers to work around the subject, get to it slowly, but that lucky old sun he just blazes and goes for it! Cosmic poem, Kate!
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metaphysically seducted......can't do the old Flip Wilson thing....when Josephine says....The devil made me do it!!!
this is so cool kate of the gifted coat hangers!!!
lol
u know what..........I WISH I WROTE IT!!!
pax..........A
I am still in limbo with my situation.......and going nutz!!!
You never cease to amaze me Kate, with your incredible poetic offerings. They are all so beautifully composed, these though, must be one of my absolute favourites. Fascinating cosmic realm fantastic poetry Kate.
warm hugs
Elga
YOur poetry is unique and always splendid!
I love the concept of the results of sun and moon conjugation!;-)
In other words. Saint Mary's church in the hollow of white hazel near a rapid whirlpool and the church of Saint Tysilio near the red cave...
The moon could be in for a hot surprise....
"The Sun and the Moon conspired
We made love
Day and Night are now One
A glorious conjugation
And time stands still
Constantly
A beauty...
"ET" move over! Another outstanding write from the magically quilled pen of a poetess par supreme!
Robert
Somehow I feel totally wiped.(lol)The attraction to heavenly bodies are our just rewards. They may be the controlling factors of life.