Playtime! (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Dear Dolphin Kate,

I think you do have characteristics of a dolphin (one of my favourite mammals) but you are so much more. There are so many facets to your nature (as reflected in your writing) and I love this playful side.
I am enjoying reading your work and hope you don't mind me cluttering up your board with my comments.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

i like how you play ;)

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

"Playtime!" plays its way through its mellifluous lines. A true poem to enrich the spirit and to nourish the mind.

Long Healthy Life to You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Glad to see you're in a good mood. Lively pen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Kate,

Tee hee

You are sooooo, soooooo right. All work and no poetry makes a dull poet. :) So git on out there and have fun, fun, fun!!!!

I absolutlely adore this one--especially imagining you as a lithe limber dolphin--somehow, that fits you :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Teehee, indeed=). Enjoyed much.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

you are not the only one.....so many of us share your feelings here
this is such a wonderful write....and makes that last line ring true!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

aha someone else sees the cosmic giggle!;-)I Love this delightful
whimsical romp! Nice break for you too I bet;-)

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

delightful, dear kate! thanks for sharing this piece of whimsy with us; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

This is wonderful! So playful and fun. I'd say you've gotten in touch with your "inner child."

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Life's just a cosmic giggle!

Yes it is, if we just let it be - swim, giggle, and write on, Kate!

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

a playful poem, and why not? Too much po-faced poetry in the world! k

Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

I don't think Nemo spoke in such lyrical fun.
Kate this is exuberant and delightful.

Josh

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Very cute and fun write, Kate. Always nice to find a playful piece mixed among the deep and heart wrenching. Thank you for the carefree moment with my coffee this morning.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Wassa Nemo??!! Hope you don't mean Nympho, Felix!!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

This is a giggly write. And dolphins are one of my favorites also. Sail on sweet poet and bemuse us all with your fabulous writes.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

Good way to show us your lighter side and get away from forced writes and I always thought you were a Nemo.

Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 24, 2005

lol..I never knew you were a dolphin Kate, cosmic indeed.

excellent.

Paul:-}