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Brown
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Well, this is "the other side of the coin" to Lost In Space, as promised last night... proving undoubtedly that my son has whipped my butt in the poetry stakes today! I'm referring to his post on my page earlier, in case you're totally confused! K xx



BROWN


Hot sun, making me sweat,
I feel the heat burnin
but it’s not time to turn yet.

Checking out the posture,
eyeing up the tans –
seems to me that silicone curves
have the biggest fans.

Limp with all this heat-fatigue,
can’t keep up with The Set --

just think that I am at my best
when I’m completely wet!



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 Reviews of "Brown"
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on August 6, 2005
Lololol ... cute funny write, Kate! Hope you are having a ball!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
Hmmnnnn interesting little poem Sweet Kate and I hope you didn't get too limp or too wet.

Felix

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
Fun visuals here Kate...lol !!!! What SP formula was that ??? :)

Hope you had a great vacation!!!

EDL

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
you'll always get the last laugh, Kate.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
hahaha your humor is aptly depicted and your choice of wet noted;-)!
Your son has a famous name, is that his nom de plume?! His poem was splendid!Like mother like son!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
With the heat wave that we have been having in New York getting, completely wet means going for a walk. Love the cool ending to your delightful and witty poem.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
I don't usually laugh out loud at poetry, but... Thanks

Reviewed on August 5, 2005
Kate,

No matter your condition, you're the quintessential poet! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) WELL DONE!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
Wet is Very Cool - at least I think so!


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